Make More Love and Peace

It’s kind of funny how reviews work.  I like reading them after the fact, just to see what other people say about something I’ve already read, and I also read them to try and get a feel for series that I’m thinking of starting.  I rarely read reviews for things I plan on reading before I get to whatever it is myself.  I did so by chance before both volumes of this series, though, just because I’m extremely interested in what other people say about LuvLuv titles.  Before the first volume, I read Julie’s positive review at Manga Maniac Cafe, and I wound up liking it okay, since I agreed with her that the characters liking each other was sort of different in the LuvLuv books.  Before I read this volume, though, I read Ed’s impression at Mangacast, and he said it was one of the worst books of the year (well, that was in the Aurora report card).  I don’t think it was that bad, but I could definitely see a lot of weaknesses in the characters and story while I was reading it.

Make of that what you will.

Regardless of any preconcieved notions I had going in, these stories focused a lot more on Ayame’s insecurities than they did the couple busting crime together.  In fact, a lot of the story deals with a teen delinquent vying for Koichi herself and making Ayame doubt her feelings or Koichi’s feelings for her.  A lot of this didn’t sit right… for instance, who in their right mind would assume their boyfriend, a police officer in his twenties, is going to immediately fall for a pushy delinquent teenager?  One of the plot points hinged on the fact the teenager told Ayame that she was putting on a “good girl act” due to the death of her parents.  This didn’t make much sense to me at all, and it deeply unhinged Ayame.  I have no idea what was even going on there.  Another plot point was the teenager suggesting that Koichi meant more to her than he did to Ayame, because given the choice to save Koichi or her parents from falling off a cliff, she would save Koichi.  Since Ayame couldn’t decide who she would save (in that case, Koichi or her grandparents), she became very upset and began doubting her feelings.  What?!  Why would anyone ever think that based on a silly age-old question like that?

And each chapter sort of read like it had a moral at the end, followed by three pages of sex.  I don’t know what happened to this series here.

The last third or so of the volume contains two unrelated stories.  The first one, “Just Like a Romance Novel,” is about a librarian falling for a boy who isn’t normally her type.  This was pretty standard fare, and I was kind of embarassed by the way she kept comparing what happened in her relationship to the plot of a romance novel.  I work in a bookstore, and such metaphors don’t really dance through my mind while I’m going about my day, so I just couldn’t accept that it was something a librarian did.

The second story, “The Way You Look at Me,” was somewhat baffling.  A woman begins dating a man, and before it gets serious, she reveals that she hides a scar she has over her eye with makeup.  Apparently this is a big deal for all her other boyfriends, who immediately dumped her when they found out (?!), but she’s happy the new guy can accept her.  She goes out on dates with the scar uncovered.  Incredibly, random passerbys stop and stare, shocked and appalled by the scar on this woman’s face.  It’s clear that her boyfriend isn’t enjoying his time out, the woman is insecure again, there is a twist, blah blah blah.  This one was less good than it was puzzling.

Anyway.  It’s probably safe to give this one a pass.  Do pick up its predecessor, “Object of Desire,” which is a wonderful LuvLuv book.